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Title: Watershed 14 May 2020 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A rather amusing chapter thank you
Title: Watershed 03 May 2020 4:38 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    -Your story has many interesting points and ideas, such as the (alleged) leukemia of Dudley and Harry vs. the Half-Blood Prince.
    -The language and action is very good, though I think the organization/pacing of some previous chapters can be improved.
    -The grammar issue I'm noticing the most is the constant jump between past and present tense.
    Do you still need a beta?

    Author's Response: Yes, are you interested?

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