Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Consequences 05 May 2020 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great fun especially the stress ball, thank you

    Author's Response: More Albus vs. Muggle world in the way!
Title: Hemistich 05 May 2020 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear Harry has no sense of self-preservation, I blame the Dursley family. Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: Our dearest Potions Professor will endeavor to get some sense into him, don't worry :)
Title: Hemistich 05 May 2020 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear Harry has no sense of self-preservation, I blame the Dursley family. Thank you a great chapter
Title: Prologue 05 May 2020 5:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start to the story. I’m sorry I haven’t reviewed before I have only just found this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you'll like it
Title: Watershed 03 May 2020 4:38 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    -Your story has many interesting points and ideas, such as the (alleged) leukemia of Dudley and Harry vs. the Half-Blood Prince.
    -The language and action is very good, though I think the organization/pacing of some previous chapters can be improved.
    -The grammar issue I'm noticing the most is the constant jump between past and present tense.
    Do you still need a beta?

    Author's Response: Yes, are you interested?
Title: Hunter 01 May 2020 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! I knew something was fishy with that letter!

    Now I wonder ... is the Leukemia even real?

    Author's Response: Err... spoilers ;)
Title: Hunter 26 Apr 2020 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Curious for more
Title: Boy 25 Apr 2020 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    Somehow, I suspect something is wrong with this letter from the Dursleys. And then there's the fact Umbridge probably knows about it ...

    I can't wait to see how that will turn out.


    Since you mentioned needing a beta: I'm not a native speaker, so can't help you with your English grammar, but I am pretty sure that the British don't celebrate Thanksgiving, since it was invented in the US. A Christmas dinner would make more sense to me in that context.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'll fix it As for the letter, you'll understand everything soon enough :)
Title: Hunter 25 Apr 2020 7:51 pm
Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait for you to update

    Author's Response: A new update comes every day or two, stay tuned
Title: Tiniest 25 Apr 2020 4:20 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the comparison of Snape to a cat. The scene with Lily in the tree confused me.

    Author's Response: Snape's dreams are usually ambiguous in the beginning, we'll work this one out in the following chapters

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