| Title: Chapter 12: wait for it
| 24 Feb 2021 5:29 am
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| Reviewer: Cas245 (Signed)
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This is an amazing story, I hadn't read fanfiction in ages and finally browsed this site again. I'm so glad I found this, you have an amazing way of writing and I can't stop thinking about the great relationship between the characters.
| Title: Chapter 12: wait for it
| 05 Jan 2021 7:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I love her library of Severus’s expressions, she is learning how to read him and sometimes have a fairly civilised conversation. Take care and have a good term, and year.
| Title: Chapter 12: wait for it
| 04 Jan 2021 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: Gar (Signed)
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I love this chapter.
Kinda figured chaos would go down at the quidditch game, but did not expect the cursed bludger of death. Snape to the rescue! In the most dramatic way possible, of course. Which was fantastic.
But I also like the end where they are FINALLY having a real conversation. Loving that Ariel has a mental “Snape translation library”. That definitely made me laugh. The end is super intense too, definitely interested to see how Snape proves he actually cares. Hugs I’m guessing? Please tell me there will be hugs? (And not instead Dumbledore interrupting as revenge for Snape having his floo locked and closed....)
Another great chapter! I love this story, you have such a poetic way of writing and the characters have depth. i literally cannot wait for the next chapter and for how the story is going to play out. Happy new year and please update soon.
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