| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 24 Aug 2022 6:00 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This plot set up is intriguing, poignant, and downright fantastic.
| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 04 Feb 2021 4:52 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'm really surprised the potion brought snape here. I just think that it'd have been better for him to come at an earlier point in this universe so he could get a true headstart on righting the decisions he'd made wrong before. Especially an earlier point would've meant less traumatic and honestly rude interactions between them so less hate to get over. I'm interested to see the story progress; by placing Severus here into this world with it as far down the path as it is, you've set quite a challenge. Should be very fun to watch it unfold
| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 27 Jun 2020 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you this story sets some interesting conundrums
| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 07 Jun 2020 8:30 am
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| Reviewer: Handa (Signed)
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This is such a great and unique story, can’t wait to read more :)
| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 07 Jun 2020 6:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Poor, poor Severus. At least Albus knows what is going on now.
So I had a thought: If Harry wore something to suppress his magic, would it help protect his core? If something like that existed, of course.
Snape really needs to get custody of Harry. I could see the Dursleys understanding Leukemia and the need for chemotherapy. Maybe they would be smug about a Muggle thing working better than a magical thing. Maybe they would prefer it if Harry lost his magic.
This is a very interesting story so far. But so uncomfortable to read about Severus, so much angst. The sooner the closer he gets to Harry, the better.
Thanks for writing and sharing! I really hope that Harry gets the help he needs.
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