Title: Chapter 29: Getting Closer
| 29 Aug 2022 5:02 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Such an intense read so far! The plot is thickening. I hope they find the leak and that Severus continues to make progress on putting the puzzle pieces together.
"He couldn't tell if it was the chemo or his nerves, but he ended up in the loo most of the night unaware that he had warded the door with a silencing charm that would be impossible for even Dumbledore to break, nor that small speckles of black were coming out each time he vomited."
(A sudden lightbulb appears, brightens, and then explodes over her head)
*cleans off her robes and looks back over the chapter* Hmm... I think I have an idea...
Also - this story is absolutely amazing, I've binged it all in the last 2 and a half days and I just can't get enough. I love your characterizations, even Ron when he's being a prat.
I cannot wait to see where this goes and if I'm right or not.
Title: Chapter 29: Getting Closer
| 03 Jul 2020 9:45 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
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