| Title: Chapter 57: A Birthday Surprise
| 06 Sep 2022 1:12 am
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This was a lovely chapter! Wonderful celebration.
| Title: Chapter 56: Exit Strategy
| 06 Sep 2022 12:55 am
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I love how this is all heating up! I’m on tenterhooks!
The beach scene was so nicely done, especially as a backdrop to Harry suffering through that horrific vision. Harry makes some excellent points about how unsafe Hogwarts can be. I hope that Severus uses an abundance of caution.
| Title: Chapter 54: The Calm Before The Storm
| 04 Sep 2022 11:48 pm
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What a beautifully calm, peaceful, and festive chapter. I really liked the creativity of the gift that Harry gave to Severus.
| Title: Chapter 53: Disappointment
| 04 Sep 2022 11:26 pm
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Oh dear, Draco. Not a good move. I love that Luna was able to help Harry put what he learned into perspective. She’s a great character.
| Title: Chapter 52: Occlumency 201
| 04 Sep 2022 1:46 pm
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Oh, that was heartbreaking. I hope they mend the rift post haste.
| Title: Chapter 51: The Second Crossroad
| 04 Sep 2022 1:19 pm
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What a great end to the horcrux/magic arc! I love how mature Harry is being about Hermione’s feelings for Draco, and how smoothly you’ve made that pairing unfold. Thanks for the heads up on attuning to the dates for the next stretch!
I’m so glad they've verified that Voldie is suffering. I wonder why his magic didn’t kill off the disease, as Harry’s should have, sans Horcrux. I’m looking forward to learning more!
Oh my gosh, what a cliffhanger chapter end! I’m so glad that Harry at least had the self-preservation to think about turning back. I loved the small things in this chapter - reflecting on how Hermione gave up her family Christmas traditions to be with Harry at the castle over the years, and Dumbledore finding a way to keep Dudley close and safe.
| Title: Chapter 48: All of the Answers
| 04 Sep 2022 12:12 am
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I’m so glad that Severus came clean (mostly), though I wish that he had been completely honest. With Hermione on the job, they were bound to figure it out anyway! I hope this doesn’t degrade Harry’s trust in Snape, just as he’s really seeing him as a father figure.
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