Excellent point on how much about Snape’s loyalties the dark lord would have pulled from Alton’s mind. I’m so curious why Snape was left untouched!
| Title: Chapter 46: The Black Market
| 03 Sep 2022 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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A great, action-packed chapter! I hope that Harry and Snape reconcile, and that Nott gets punished.
| Title: Chapter 45: The Final Puzzle Piece
| 03 Sep 2022 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Ah, I thought we had it…until I read the author’s note!
| Title: Chapter 44: Back to Classes
| 03 Sep 2022 4:25 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I cheered for the students’ solidarity with Harry! I like Draco’s intended career choice, and look forward to seeing how the DM/HG pairing develops. Thanks for your wonderful story.
The magical theory puzzle is interesting! I really like how Dudley and Harry are interacting now.
That was a totally heartbreaking realization for Severus at the end there. I like Harry’s maturity over the article, though really hope that Skeeter gets what’s coming to her!
| Title: Chapter 41: Meeting Meghan
| 01 Sep 2022 4:39 pm
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I wonder if Harry’s intuition about Meghan is right. I’m hoping the black stuff is the horcrux!
I’m so glad that Harry’s fear is unlikely to be realized….whew!
| Title: Chapter 39: The Interrogation
| 01 Sep 2022 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Terrific chapter! There were so many interesting questions raised about what’s going on with Harry’s magic and all the interconnections. Truly enjoyable chapter. I feel bad for clogging your inbox with notifications of all these reviews, but it’s the only way I can show my deep gratitude for your story so please bear with me!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love reading the reviews along with the reader. It's refreshing to see it through a reader's eye.
| Title: Chapter 38: Plans Change - Part 2
| 30 Aug 2022 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Terrific, action-packed chapter! Thanks so much.
Author's Response: First and foremost, thank you for all of your comments on the chapters of this fic! I hope you enjoy the wild journey in store for Severus and Harry!
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