| Title: Chapter 72: The Tunnels
| 31 Jul 2021 3:21 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Thank you for writing this touching and suspenseful tale. I really enjoy it.
Hm, would a highly intelligent scientist, as Professor Snape is, use 'anyways'?
Isn't it very informal style and teenager-ish, and more American than British Received Pronunciation?
But, please keeping writing more in this wonderful universe that you created.
not crying not crying not crying AM crying
| Title: Chapter 4: What's Really Going On
| 04 Feb 2021 4:52 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'm really surprised the potion brought snape here. I just think that it'd have been better for him to come at an earlier point in this universe so he could get a true headstart on righting the decisions he'd made wrong before. Especially an earlier point would've meant less traumatic and honestly rude interactions between them so less hate to get over. I'm interested to see the story progress; by placing Severus here into this world with it as far down the path as it is, you've set quite a challenge. Should be very fun to watch it unfold
Oh, my.
This was perfectly wonderful.
Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 75: Epilogue
| 14 Nov 2020 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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Thank you so much for this fabulous fic. I really enjoyed reading it. I would love to see the continuation of this story about how much magic Harry has left and him learning to use it. Thank you again for sharing your story.
| Title: Chapter 75: Epilogue
| 23 Oct 2020 7:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for your wonderful story and for completing it in such a good way. I’ve started you new story and I’m enjoying it but this is still my favourite at the moment.
If you do write the maintenance years I would love to see how Hermione reacted to the fact that Draco betrayed Harry to save her. I’m sure she was ok at the end but that must have conflicted her.
| Title: Chapter 74: The 21st of May
| 23 Oct 2020 7:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely ending to a very roller coaster ride thank you so much
| Title: Chapter 73: The 15th and 16th of May
| 23 Oct 2020 5:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well thought out and rational explanation of the events and so sad with Severus’s thoughts on the significance of the day
| Title: Chapter 72: The Tunnels
| 22 Oct 2020 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love how the Slytherins plot and plan. You are holding all the threads so tightly together it is wonderful to read
| Title: Chapter 71: Forgiveness
| 22 Oct 2020 5:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for a brilliant chapter. Draco was right in his conversation with Harry and was what was needed to bring about the reconciliation. They all have their own agenda but with all of those minds working for the same aim it should get interesting
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