Just a note that your story is so compelling that it’s been on my mind even after finishing all the posted chapters. In this chapter, I love how Severus isn’t mad at Harry. He acts like a true parent in understanding what Harry would do if given the opportunity, and then takes responsibility for not having ensured that Harry truly had no opportunities to pursue a dangerous path. Your story is a great blend of action, nail biting danger, and the development of relationships. I’m really enjoying it, and look forward to seeing what’s ahead (especially for Harry)!
Oh my goodness, the plot thickens to new heights! This was so good. I love your unique spin on canon. And, of course, your wonderfully long and rich chapters. This is a compelling story, and I’m looking forward to seeing how this all plays out! Thanks so much.
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