This is really all written story, I will for sure tune in in the next chapters!
| Title: Folly
| 18 Jan 2021 11:09 pm
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Great chapter with a lot of movement and plot development, I love the way you are blending your story and cannon, thank you
| Title: Vulnerable
| 28 Dec 2020 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very thought provoking chapter
| Title: Wolfsbane
| 27 Nov 2020 8:17 am
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What a lot in this chapter! I am so intrigued by the pillars that Dumbledore entered and how he is trying to keep to the path. I can’t wait until the really true deviant throws him off course. Thank you so much for updating your truly original story
| Title: Wolfsbane
| 26 Nov 2020 10:05 pm
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What a lot in this chapter! I am so intrigued by the pillars that Dumbledore entered and how he is trying to keep to the path. I can’t wait until the really true deviant throws him off course. Thank you so much for updating your truly original story
Horrible children I loathe bullies! Thank you for updating your fantasy story
| Title: Bruised
| 21 Oct 2020 4:32 pm
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Very good blend of cannon and your story, love Hermione’s fussing, very in character thank you
| Title: Demons
| 28 Sep 2020 7:42 pm
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Very f
Good chapter, I like the ides of a polijuiced Severus thank you
Oh, I thoght that was Tonks. But I suppose that couldn't have happend.
I like Severus watching over Harry:)
And it's nice with James and Lily and also that you didn't downpaly adoption as something that has no value. There letter was so lovely.
I am thrilled to read more of it (hopefully).
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