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Title: The Beginning of a Very Bad Day 05 Jun 2010 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Tally (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this looks fantastic, I've always loved the concept of the Dursleys being directly implicated. I mean, seeing it for real. Great chapter.
Title: The Beginning of a Very Bad Day 05 Oct 2006 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow!  I'm really liking this so far.  Great that you didn't magically transform the Dursleys into the Evil Dursleys - it's almost funny the way that they all show their 'concern' for Harry in this chapter.

    Good description of how Harry feels.  I think it fits.  :)

    You're Jocemum from ff-dot-net, eh?  Glad to see another tale of yours after reading T&S and C&E.

    -K

Title: The Beginning of a Very Bad Day 13 Mar 2005 8:46 am
Reviewer: Grym (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start! You've done a particularly good job capturing the numbness born of grief that Harry's experiencing. The image of him sitting silently in the rain and the short "Someone did." of the dinnertable are so poignant in a very understated way. The sudden burst of action at the end definitely gets the blood pumping, however. Can't wait to read on!
Title: The Beginning of a Very Bad Day 01 Feb 2005 11:47 pm
Reviewer: AccioSeverus (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, wow , WOW! This is fabulous! My heart is racing! On to read the next chapter!
Title: The Beginning of a Very Bad Day 23 Jan 2005 5:46 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww. How sweet of Harry, to move his cousin and aunt into the house... good chapter. ;)

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