Luna is so epic. She needs more stage time. And Harry's victory over Voldemort was extremely well written.
Wow, I think Boom, Bang WOAH! describes it neatly. Wow, terrific chapter. I was bouncing (the whole time). The DA and Remus and Sev and Murdo were absolutely great!!
At the end of the chapter I noticed that it was exactly what Ron said to Harry that was bothering me for some time now. I have to congratulate you, you managed to make the reader feel exactly like the characters. That was quite a feat. ^___^ So, anyway, pleeeaaase, let Harry be able to fight!!
Love your story still, your Melfis.
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