Title: Disaster on Privet Drive
| 05 Oct 2006 5:22 pm
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Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Ah! Looks like this one's shaping up to be even better than your last (at least, the last one I read). A couple of lines stand out in their amazing-ness, lol: when "the last living Marauder looked back" I nearly started crying right then! Also, Petunia's statement about Lily, calling her "my sister" in such a context was really moving.
Of course, when Vernon died, I nearly started crying, too... which just goes to show what good writing can do, because I didn't give a hoot for him before I read this story... likewise, your tactic of Harry taking the Dursleys through one at a time created a lot of tension and really tugged at the heartstrings. Good work!
-K