well, um...wow. that was lovely, i hate you for stopping right there, but it was lovely. You have great characterization, and you are right on target for keeping canon. Watch out for moving too quickly though, its easy to get carried away with action and forget to explain the rest of whats going on.
I love this story, you must keep going.
-Phoenix
Title: Disaster on Privet Drive
| 28 Jan 2005 8:59 pm
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Reviewer: m_c_l (Anonymous)
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great story so far, please update soon!!!
awww. poor Harry. and I suppose Petunia and Dudley too. enjoyable chapter. :D
aww. How sweet of Harry, to move his cousin and aunt into the house... good chapter. ;)
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