| Title: Chapter 8 Welcome Back
| 27 Oct 2020 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed)
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This a fantastic story so far. It is starting off as a really promising story. I really enjoyed it. I'm super excited to read more.
Little concerned about a the Mary Sue though. It could also use some small minor edits, like the fight with Bellatrix, Harry, Kingsley and the now known 4th person last chapter. I didnt even realize there was a 4th person. This would explain my confused comment last chapter about Kingsley.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I wasn't sure what you meant at first, but after rereading a couple of times I agree it needed some editing. I hope this has made it somewhat less confusing ;)
| Title: Chapter 8 Welcome Back
| 07 Aug 2020 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter
I’m hooked and looking forward to more.
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