| Title: Chapter 7 The Hogwarts Express
| 27 Oct 2020 9:20 pm
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| Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed)
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I don't know the reason but I don't trust Kai-Enna all that much. I could of course be mistaken. And I'm wondering if Draco had something to do with the attack (as well). Thanks for the chapter!
| Title: Chapter 6 A Question of Trust
| 27 Oct 2020 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed)
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Thank you for the chapter. Loved it!
| Title: Chapter 13 Occlumency
| 04 Oct 2020 5:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love how you are portraying Ginny and Harry coming together, one day Harry might get it! A great chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 12 Experience is the Best Teacher
| 20 Sep 2020 6:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very courageous or foolhardy of Harry. Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 11 Detention & Defence
| 06 Sep 2020 4:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter from Harry’s point of view
Love this so far, it’s been a while since I read any stories on here so looking forward to seeing where you take this :)
| Title: Chapter 5 The Southern Raiders
| 02 Sep 2020 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Chrysea (Signed)
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is the title of the chapter supposed to be an avatar: the last airbender reference or have I just watched the show too much?
Author's Response: Ha! Funny thing is that I'm currently watching the show again (for the hundredth time, give or take). It was not a conscious choice, but now that it does share a chapter title with Avatar: The Last Airbender, I'm glad it does! :D
I love your story so far and this chapter was great. I'm looking forward to reading more!
| Title: Chapter 10 Mondays...
| 01 Sep 2020 1:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter. I wonder I’d Severus has an agenda with the way he behaved or just being Severus?
| Title: Chapter 9 Trust is a Dangerous Game
| 15 Aug 2020 9:31 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter you brought a wonderful sense of menace and evil in the encounter with Voldemort, thank you so much
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