Well, I think that was a pretty favourable result for Harry considering where he was at. He got the girl, has a family - what he wanted most from life so no wonder he sounds a happy man.
I love the balance between Snape's dislike of Harry and his desire to help him. Wonder what the mind healer will say.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Jul 2020 9:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very well thought out story, and an interesting idea
Interesting premise. It seems likely that Harry would have some damage from the original curse and that the connection to Voldy would add to the problems. I like your Harry and Snape. They seem very much in character. I also liked that when Harry realized he needed help, suddenly Snape was 'sir.'
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it! I've always liked the idea of Harry's scar causing more damage than just the superficial scar itself. Glad you like this rendition of Snape and think he's in character, I'm trying really hard to keep him that way!
Woah!! This is AWESOME! Fantastic start! Your Snape and Harry are so in character. The physical problem you gave Harry was really unique and well thought out of. I loved the slow understanding and build of the severity of the problem.
I'm loving this story so far. Thanks so much for responding to my challenge! I look forward to reading more when it comes out. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it! I saw the challenge and immediately was like 'aha! I can do this one!' I've always liked the idea of the curse scar being more than just a superficial wound (or even just a horcrux) and carrying with it a little more weight.
Interesting idea. Likemitmsomfar.
I like this! I'm curious to see where it goes. :)
Hope you can sort this out favourably for Harry in just 2 chapters.
Author's Response: Not gonna lie, I don't think any of my fics so far have had a "favorable" outcome for Harry. Survivable, yes. Favorable.... debatable.
Stroke?
Author's Response: Close, though not quite. Next chapter will have all the answers.
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