Title: Master Harry
| 15 Mar 2021 9:19 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you fort updating I loved the information from the mines, very interesting. Intriguing why hair put the things in the cupboard I can’t remember it being mentioned before.
Author's Response: Because Arran accidentally locked him in there, and because he was traumatised before that at the Dursleys being shut up in the cupboard under the stairs. Harry figured if he packed the cupboard full of things there'd be no room for him in there. It didn't show him putting the things in there, but this is why he did.
I loved reading your magical take on the mines and minerals. Thanks so much for giving Harry a strong backbone towards Draco (I chuckled aloud at their dialogue - how nicely done). I also loved seeing Harry do so well when questioned by Lucius. It’s nice to see Severus tolerating Harry more, and I’m looking forward to him learning more about Harry’s past. Thanks so much for the great chapter, and looking forward to seeing what’s ahead!
Really good chapter. Loved it - although you kept switching from Lucius to Lucious - autocorrect maybe? Hope we don't have to wait so long for another chapter :)
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