Muchas gracias, tu historia me mantuvo al borde del asiento, era muy interesante. Espero tus próximas historias, sin duda las leeré :D
Que pena que terminó u.u
I absolutely loved this story! Harry and Snape were so sweet together. b29;a039;
| Title: Chapter 24
| 29 Dec 2020 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I don’t want Harry to be re-aged! He’s lovely being looked after by two people who are being kind. Thank you for your update
Well written description of Harry's confused feelings over Snape's revelation.
Nicely written portrayal of Harry's reaction as he sees Snape and then realizes who he really is and then again when he does see Snape.
| Title: Chapter 23
| 15 Dec 2020 4:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter, Harry has the sense to see through the past to how Severus is now. Dumbledore is so misguided and set on his “weapon” that he can’t see a lost frightened boy. Your writing is masterful thank you
| Title: Chapter 22
| 15 Dec 2020 3:40 pm
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Thank you a great chapter. Good old Hermione and Ron I hope Dumbledore’s apology is a good one!
| Title: Chapter 21
| 15 Dec 2020 11:42 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, poor Harry one step forward and two back. Looking forward to reading the meeting between Severus and Hermione!
Loved the plotting and how the four were able to come up with a plan despite the antagonism.
Nice description of Harry's panic when he realizes Dumbledore has been thinking as a general rather than a father figure. I like how Harry is safe because the secret keeper is Alice.
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