Nice depiction of the Severus-Sirius feud as well as of flashbacks.
I’ve spent like five hours tonight positively DEVOURING this fix. It is so good. I love Harry’s inner confusion and the way you validate the abuse and neglect without having to resort to hyperbole or unrealistic levels.
Can’t wait to see what Dumbledore has to say. Can’t wait to see if we’re supposed to trust it at all.
Impressed and enthralled with this. Can’t wait for more!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 29 Nov 2020 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, lovely that they are safe, although I think it is only temporary, and that the necklace was recovered. Thank you again for your wonderful story.
Very good, I hope Dumbledore doesn't become too ooc but otherwise I'm curious
Very good, I hope Dumbledore doesn't become too ooc but otherwise I'm curious
Very good, I hope Dumbledore doesn't become too ooc but otherwise I'm curious
Very good, I hope Dumbledore doesn't become too ooc but otherwise I'm curious
| Title: Chapter 19
| 24 Nov 2020 4:44 pm
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Fantastic chapter. The scene in the cupboard was very ghostly and chilling. The part with Avery was very scary and it was all so well written. A shame he lost the necklace but great when the three turned up to save the day. Unbelievable what Dumbledore said I hope Remus and Sirius give him a hard time. Thank you for updating your wonderful story.
OMG the waiting is the hardest part with this story, I cannot wait to see what happens next. Maybe I need to wait for another like... 2 chapters or something, so I have more to read.
Anywho, seriously, I LOVE this story. Absolutely adore it. I need to go back and re-read so I can see if I can figure out what Dumbledore was actually doing, but I started panicking so bad as I read I was right there with little Harry.
I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next.
I can't wait for you to update
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