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Title: Chapter 1: Harry on the Run 16 Jan 2023 10:44 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great start.
    I’m hooked.
Title: Chapter 1: Harry on the Run 16 Jan 2021 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent start to the story. Your Harry has all his “saving people” in a very heightened sense
Title: Chapter 1: Harry on the Run 05 Jan 2021 9:45 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic start! It seems in character for Harry to think about his friends and suffer to keep them safe. Amazing that he could last so long on his own, but he is a survivor.

    One thing I noticed is Alistair Moody should be spelled Alastor Moody.

    I'm enjoying the writing and story so far! Great introduction and descriptions. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I will make those edits. I had my spell check doing weird things with names. 

    I appreciate all of your help- thanks for the feedback!

     


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