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Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown 17 Jan 2021 5:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I’m so pleased that someone is asking questions about why he ran away although the way it came out was a little dramatic!
Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown 05 Jan 2021 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed) [Report This]
    Muy interesante, estoy ansiosa por leer más. Muchas gracias :D

    Siento escribir en español owo

    I love your story ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!! It motivates me a lot to know there are people reading and enjoying. THANK YOU for the review!!
Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown 05 Jan 2021 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry is getting a haircut! And I'm so glad that Harry broke down and told Snape the reason why he ran away in the first place.

    I'm not sure Harry really trusts Snape with his safety yet. I look forward to that feeling and trust growing.

    I hope Snape has some pepperup potions or missing sleep potions to take. With all these late nights he's got to be tired.

    Poor Harry is worn out. I wonder if he doesn't see the invisibility cloak as a security blanket after sleeping with it for so long when he was on the run. I bet it's filthy too unless it has magic keeping it clean.

    Do Harry's old clothes still fit him? Will the Gryffindor badges on his robes be changed back to whatever they were before he got sorted?

    Fantastic story and development so far! I appreciate you leaving the chapter were it is. No cliffhangers.

    I really look forward to seeing how Snape will get the Potions group to allow him to make Harry his apprentice. Would mentioning Harry's orphan state and that Harry is the son of Snape's oldest friend help? Or will it be based purely on potential? I can't wait to find out.

    Thank you for writing and posting! Please update when you can. :)

    Author's Response: These are all great questions and they will DEFINITELY be addressed in the upcoming chapters. I'm working on them now, and I'm smiling because we will get a fun few Snape and Harry interactions as they deal with all of these things :)

    You hit the nail on the head with the cloak. It was his only piece of "magic" that kept him safe-- and you're absolutely right that it became a security blanket. Plus it helped him feel connected to his dad. I don't think this is the last we'll be seeing or hearing about this cloak :)
     
    I've been writing like a fiend this week- so hopefully I'll have another chapter up soon. This story has come to me in a huge wave and I can't seem to get it out quickly enough. Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful reviews- it helps me stay motivated and excited to write this story and know that it's not going completely out into the void! 

    Sidenote: Snapes not the only one, I think I need some pepper-up, lol.  

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