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Title: Chapter 24 20 Aug 2021 9:19 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Jumping Jehosaphat! Not *another* "misunderstanding" built on faulty assumptions and lack of context!

    Colin is already off to a good start on what he'll need to go to work for the Lamestream Media of today!

    "The Daily Prophet" was *supposed* to demonstrate IRONY *not* be a blueprint for how today's media functions: Highest bidder, leftist bias, and a dumbed-down sheeple populace. "What a strange new world we live in..."

    Nice intro for Elias to the Slytherins. That Theo and the others are becoming aware is a *good* thing. While you've now got me referring to 'Mione as "Granger" and that her "fast and loose" (and expurgated!) interpretation and relay of her "meeting" with Elias has become "evidence" against him!

    He didn't ask her "blood status", he asked if she were a muggleborn and they were having as much of a conversation as Elias was capable of having with his condition and stutter, but Granger had to keep pushing, and then she began treating him as if he were mentally defective and not giving him time to finish his sentences! Then she refused to back down and give the subject and his growing sense of frustration a rest! He certainly didn't mean for his accidental magic to blow her out the door!
    But, ya know, I don't think it was just *his* accidental magic; I think it was both of them and the ambient magic and electricity combined to amplify the effect!
    But *your* Granger has to be right!

    Something else worries me: What if Moldywarts decides that he wants Sev to bring his son to meet him? The horrible thing is that Moldy is so warped he'd probably think nothing of deciding to eliminate Sev's "defective" and "inferior" half-blood offspring and think he was doing Sev a "favor".

    I still don't think that Harry got his parseltongue from Moldy (Rowling never allowed Harry to test if he still had the ability after Moldy's defeat, did she?) and I think that both Harry and TMR were Slytherin/Peverell descendants. I think Harry's came through *Lily* through a revived squib line and I'd prefer to think that *that* was Lily's protection. The resurrection blood made them "brothers" of a sort...

    Anyhoo, I was really hoping that "Hermione" would be able to help Eli with his thesis, from the muggleborn perspective. *sigh* But instead she's choosing to make herself his enemy!
    Imagine, pitting yourself against a severely disabled child! Your Granger's got some problems!

    See ya!🤗
    MelJ
Title: Chapter 24 18 May 2021 9:55 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story! I think it’s so funny how everyone thinks that Harry cares about blood status while he’s doing an intense muggle study project XD
Title: Chapter 24 08 May 2021 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, Colin is certainly stoking the fires for Elias. I loved the discussion between Remus and Elias I think you are raising many issues that are very interesting. I liked how you showed the vulnerable side of Slytherin house and how they welcomed Elias. It would be lovely to have some more Elias/ Severus interaction but I know you have so many strands of this story to keep going.
    Thank you an excellent chapter
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I love reading this story. I like how we are now going to see the perspectives of the Slytherins.

    Colin is going to stir up so much trouble. Poor Harry.

    Thank you for the updates.
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. Nott’s story was a surprise and added to your story. Is he going to be upset or suspicious about Harry’s survival? With a sibling who died while Harry survived, he could be interested in why.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I don't want to give anything away, but Nott is going to have a rough time... :/
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 1:33 pm
Reviewer: Lady Chi 13 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story. Very well written.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Lady Chi 13 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story. Very well written.
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Lady Chi 13 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story. Very well written.
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Lady Chi 13 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story. Very well written.
Title: Chapter 24 06 May 2021 1:59 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    The boy who might be harry's biggest fan turns out to possibly be elias biggest threat. That photo could sneak a thousand words (I can't remember if elias still had the scar but even without it, doesn't he still look like lily a bit) or even it'll just be the prophet taking the pic and running with it trying to see who knows anything about elias. Poor kid can't catch a break. Though it may be wishful thinking, I kinda maybe got the feeling that the kids weren't die hard death eater wanna bes. Interesting that you had another character who had harry's disease. The disease is the one thing that's 100% infallible even, no one can check his medical stuff and say he doesn't have it. So theo knowing a bit about it makes it more credible (at least in my mind ... Y'know how somebody has something and you've never heard of it so you're like is that even a real thing) so anyway, awesome work on this chapter!

    Author's Response: Potential biggest threat! There are so many different ways that this could fail apart and... I'm super excited to post the next chapter, but I don't wanna give spoilers and I need to finish another few before I post that one so I have a bit of a bigger backlog of chapters to pull from... I like studying strange or obscure diseases, it interests me greatly and really helps with my IRL job. There has been a lot of times where I learn about a new disease only for it to come up either in conversation or as an actual diagnosis at work. Very rarely do these things exist on their own, and in a insular community like the wizarding world (which has just gotten out of a major conflict within these children's life spans) I'm very certain someone somewhere would have been exposed to the same diagnosis or at least a similar one.

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