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Title: Chapter 26 20 Aug 2021 10:10 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    So COOL! Using Draco - Pureblood Scion and a mundane "potato battery" to prove that electricity boosts magical power!

    It also explains why Eli's accidental magic was amplified at the hospital to actually eject Hermione out the door and into a wall instead of just pushing her to leave!

    Excellent! Love *some* of the arcs!

    Wow, Ron's the one using his brain; are you sure you didn't have Ron and Hermione switch bodies?

    Thanks!
    MelJ
Title: Chapter 26 20 May 2021 1:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely surprise to have an update of this story. I was surprised that Ron has been the one to think of Harry being Elias but he is good at strategy so very clever of you.

    Author's Response: Exactly! Book Ron is the strategy king, not just comedic relief.
Title: Chapter 26 18 May 2021 10:45 am
Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very much for the chapter, although it is sooner, we readers donīt mind at all ;)

    Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed!
Title: Chapter 26 17 May 2021 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Captn-Fedora (Signed) [Report This]
    I cant think of the last time I was this invested in a fic- this is so good! i kept wanting to comment on specific things but I wanted to get to the next chapter more than write.I love how planned out this is with all the little arcs and small things that lead into bigger events.
    But this is the reason I usually never read unfinished works. they're so good and then I hate having to wait for more!

    Author's Response: Oh man do I feel that! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I have everything up to the end planned, but I really don't want to make it rushed to get there. So: end in sight, but a long way off. At the rate I'm going with this, I am guessing I'll be finished before new year, but that's if crazy doesn't happen and crazy always happens.
Title: Chapter 26 17 May 2021 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Captn-Fedora (Signed) [Report This]
    I cant think of the last time I was this invested in a fic- this is so good! i kept wanting to comment on specific things but I wanted to get to the next chapter more than write.I love how planned out this is with all the little arcs and small things that lead into bigger events.
    But this is the reason I usually never read unfinished works. they're so good and then I hate having to wait for more!
Title: Chapter 26 17 May 2021 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm probably going to be one of the few who are excited that Ron is figuring out that Elias and Harry may be the same person.

    I know he can be hot-headed! But I truly hope that deep down, when it comes to Harry's safety that Ron would know to hold his tongue.

    I know Hermione's very clever, so I can't imagine her taking too long to figure it out too...I just don't know how it would all play out. I want Harry to not be alone aside from Draco, but I don't know how the other 2/3 of the "Golden Trio" would handle everything.

    I guess we'll have to wait and see!

    Author's Response: Yup, just wait and see. :)
Title: Chapter 26 16 May 2021 5:44 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh gosh harry figured out how to increase a wizards magic with muggle electricity? That totally explains why magic and electricity never seem to work out; the magic is increased so much that the wizard is probably basically using a sledgehammer where a regular hammer used to do the job (that made sense in my head). I personally hope Ron doesn't go any further with his thoughts; he'd be one of the worst people to know the truth. The second he got angry about some stupid thing he'd rat Elias out to Dumbledore and any body else, as evidenced by how he and Hermione's turned the entire school against Elias when they had legit 0 evidence to do so. I was ecstatic to see draco go visit harry. I'm hoping the day comes soon where Elias can tell draco the truth of his identity; I mean, I think right now maybe draco is still caught up in being what lucious wants him to be but one day maybe he'll be his own man and he'll value Harry's true friendship over the false pride of a father who only cares when he's not meeting his standards. I think harry should be careful with remus too. I mean he's not dumb, he'll realize "harry had a friend with a port key and the friend died and that was recent and oh guess what Elias had the same situation recently? That's suspicious"... I feel like Elias is on borrowed time and I just wish it wasn't so. He might have some impairments as Elias but I think he's much happier and freer to be himself as Elias than he ever was harry. I couldn't believe you updated so soon but as always I'm ridiculously glad you did!

    Author's Response: There's much more to the electricity problem than just hammers of varying sizes, but we'll get there in the end. I don't want to give too much away! I want so badly to respond to every part of your reviews, but if I do I'm going to end up dropping spoilers like mad and I don't want to do that!

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