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Title: Chapter 39 01 Aug 2021 5:15 am
Reviewer: Ella (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so good! I keep checking back in every few weeks and always get suckdd in, I accidently stayed up to 3am last night (oops), can't wait to see what happens next

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Title: Chapter 39 01 Aug 2021 1:14 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Well crap, Voldemort has managed to tune into Elias' signal again. Or vice versa. So now we know what disaster Shannon is dealing with. The reason your plot point was missed is its been too long since history class. LOL I learned about Cherynobyl in school, but its been almost thirty years since I graduated! Remus is lucky he didn't short circuit the computer. lol Interesting that Frank seems to know something is going on with him and they both have Cruciatus damage.

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Title: Chapter 39 01 Aug 2021 1:03 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I think if Elias describes his dream like that to remus, remus is going to make some big leaps with his research.i mean he felt like static when voledmort was using magic! When remus was first ranting about how muggles used it for bad my mind went "oh merlin do wizards not know about nuclear weapons and stuff" and then he learned about chernobyl and I figured he might go on a bit of a rampage-- he finally thought mugglez capable of doing something amazing only for them to stuff it up with nuclear weapons and meltdowns. Frightening that the ministry hid that from wizards; I mean I get not panicking the public but who says wizards can't get sick from radiation and whatnot? Anyway, awesome chapter -- thanks for it

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Title: Chapter 38 27 Jul 2021 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A wonderful chapter as always. I really felt for the three students and thought Severus handled them really well with compassion and sternness. Not so sure about Sirius, his sorrow seems to be for himself rather than Harry. I know he has had a dreadful time but he needs to “take a pull” as my grandmother would say or he will ruin the entire edifice.
    Thank you again for a wonderful story

    Author's Response: Phew! I was worried about what people would have thought about how Severus dealt with this entire ordeal, but I thought binding them would be the safest way to deal with them. Sirius has some pretty major mental health problems, that's for sure, but not to worry there is a plan in action here!
Title: Chapter 38 27 Jul 2021 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoy reading your story. It makes me so sad though that Harry is having a hard time of it. I am very glad that Severus decided to bring The Gryffindor trio into the inner circle. I really hope Sirius gets his act together. It is making me sad that Buckbeak is stuck in the room with no interaction! Someone needs to free that hippogriff! I’m hoping they figure out that Harry is a horrocrux and by removing Voldemort‘s fragmented soul from Harry it’ll help him get better. Thank you again for your wonderful story. I can’t wait for the next update.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story. I was rather hesitant about bringing the Gryffindors in now, but I need them a bit for the set up for the chaos arc. I honestly wanted Sirius to have some more mental health strain than what he is given in the books. Animagus or not, he was housed in Azkaban for 12 years after having literally everything taken from him. I only hoped that I portrayed the severe depression he fell in well enough. I felt bad doing that to Buckbeak, but things will get better for him. Honestly, the fact that he was housed in Grimmauld Place in the first place always bothered me. As for the horcrux, I have a plan... Don't worry about it too much!
Title: Chapter 38 24 Jul 2021 3:56 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so exited for the next chapter holy damn

    Author's Response: next chapter will be up in like 5 minutes!
Title: Chapter 38 23 Jul 2021 1:51 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, so the potion does what deaging would do down a molecular level. Now I know why you were laughing at that one review. His brain was re-wired all right - into a mess! I am glad that everyone knows, even if Sirius is on probation. I am not going to guess the plotline because you do such a fantastic job telling this story that I don't feel the need to!

    Now if Severus can bind them, he could have Malfoy take an oath also. Evil family or not, he would not be able to talk anyway. Looking further to the next chapter. Why does your birthday only come once a year? I wouldn't mind another week with 2 chapters. LOL

    Author's Response: I am continuing to laugh because you still don't know! I'll give you a hint: you misspelled a word. But yeah, his entire nervous system got messed up. I'm still figuring out what to do about Malfoy tbh... And with these massive chapters I've been putting out and the fact that we are moving into by far and away my favorite and most anticipated arc, I don't think I could manage to do two chapters in a week.
Title: Chapter 38 22 Jul 2021 3:33 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I know Sirius is going to pass, and I do understand why severus is hesitant to tell him but if he can trust two people notorious for turning on harry for the smallest things, he can trust Sirius with an oath. Remus at least I mean, he told Hermione (hedging is the same as outright telling in my book), he should've told Sirius. I just feel for him

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    Them turning on Harry was the reason I needed Snape to bind them with an oath. Also, I can't see him trusting teenagers to do anything they are told to do correctly after his own teenage years went so terribly. If he didn't tell them, they would continue to look into it. If he lied to them or tried to prevaricate, they would have continued to look into it because someone had to have told Snape they were digging into it anyways OR they would have gone to Dumbledore. As much effort as Snape put into hiding Elias, he really only had a short period of time to do it in and he had to operate in some rather grey territory to get it done. There's bound to be some pretty obvious holes and it definitely didn't help that Elias kinda shot it in the foot while he was confused.

    I love Sirius, but Snape definitely doesn't. Honestly, I think the reason I didn't have Remus tell Sirius was that he hasn't really been at Grimmauld Place all that much. Besides, I don't think Remus would have told him unless questioned directly. Hermione kind of backed him into a corner he wasn't prepared for when he wasn't feeling all that great. I think you'll like what I'm going to do to Sirius though.

Title: Chapter 37 20 Jul 2021 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lot of information here. First of all I wanted to scream at Dumbledore, he was only concerned about Harry as related to Voldemort, not for himself, how manipulative is that!
    I like how Tonks and Kingsley are going about their fact finding, I think if there is a showdown they may be on Harry’s and Severus’s side.
    I had to re-read the conversation between Hermione and Remus, but he, and you of course, were being clever I just hope it is not too much.
    Shannon and Severus are on the right lines but I’m worried about how Elias will react to the news. Finally I loved Remus in the library and I’m wondering if electricity might be the instrument to resolve the conflict and in particular, horcrux.
    Loved the chapter and the story, it is so well written and complex, thank you

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying this story! It's been an absolute joy to write.

    I want to scream every time I have to write Dumbledore in this. I much prefer writing him as a grandfatherly figure, but I needed him to be manipulative in this so I saw it as a challenge. Then all of the other plot lines started and now everything is a challenge, including writing him. But yeah, manipulative old man who we can hate on in this story.

    Tonks and Kingsley are literally just being good detectives. I find it funny to put them within a few steps of being on the right track at all times. They're getting there but they're running into the fact that the entire issue is so complicated and hidden that as they pull out one piece of evidence another bit of the story comes to light.

    The conversation between Remus and Hermione is resolved in the next chapter. Which is posted now!

    I can't talk much about any of the Shannon plot line right now because we are moving into it quickly. I will say this much: Elias's reaction to this is very much the reason this next arc is dubbed chaos. Oooo, ominous forshadowing lol!

Title: Chapter 37 16 Jul 2021 3:05 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I don't even know where to start! I do think poor Sirius needs told Harry is alive. He's not so much in Dumbledore's pocket anymore and I just feel so sorry for him! Looking forward to the conversation between Hermione and Ron after her talk with Remus!

    Just great, Elias was doing his usual eavesdropping. It was late though, so not sure how much he understood. I am probably seeing something that is not there but I am hoping the interest Shannon is taking in Remus might result in some of his medical issues being addressed.

    I apologize for inadvertently giving a spoiling last review, hope I didn't do it again! lol I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see your original outline and if you do work on it as a side story - feel free to send more.

    Author's Response:

    I hope you'll find the next chapter an adequate one in regards to conversations between our various factions!

    It wasn't as late as you think, it was only lunch time which puts him in prime awareness time, unfortunately. I will say, as much as I would love for Shannon to help Remus, her primary focus is spell damage and lycanthropy is not a spell. It would make for a lovely interaction, but I don't think she would really want to take him on as a patient when she is actually quite busy dealing with an ever unfolding crisis in Belarus/Ukraine.

    Oh, no, you have no idea how much your inadvertent spoiler made me laugh when I saw it. And I know that you have absolutely no clue what it was as it is a simple linguistic mistake that I am 100% playing with in this story and plays very much into one of the main plotlines (not the secret one I keep alluding to, though). If you do end up doing it again, I may poke fun at it, but I am so so so confident that you don't know what you said and that no one else will pick up on it that I have been cackling literally since I saw it. If you do do it again, know that it only makes me laugh to see it.

    Hope you're enjoying Twitch btw. Like I said, radically different from this story in so many ways, but you can pick up on a lot of the similar elements between the stories. I don't really do "outlines" per se so I can't really send that, but I may post a chapter at the end of all of this that is just pure notes I made while writing this that has all of the references and some of the more comedic elements I put in the story for myself so I can enjoy it more as I read through it over and over and over again to try and keep the continuity there.

    As always, glad you enjoyed!


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