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Reviews For Electric Avenue
Also poor Elias, poor Severus even! The heartache Sev must feel for Elias and the deep terror that Elias is feeling...I could feel it oozing out of the words - which is probably why I shrieked because I was so enthralled in the story. Any way, thank you again - and I NEED MORE! But I understand work... I'm currently working now. Well... waiting for calls. Yay working IT! Author's Response: Wow, there are some emotions in the reviews! I am cackling like a madwoman right now, not even going to lie. Not to worry, this story will still be here when you start feeling better, so no rush. I know I’m being mean, but it’s only like 6am for them in the story and Severus has a few more important things he needs to take care of before classes start…. He isn’t going to have a good day. I’m very happy to have made someone shriek! Glad you’re enjoying it! Feel better soon!
And now that I've read that review, I've decided to go back and re-read the entire story with my investigative glasses on. If you say all the pieces are there, I'm going to find them! Besides, it's time - I haven't re-read it in a while and I simply can't get enough of this amazing story. Author's Response: Yeeeees! Do it! You may need to have a look up a few things to find some of them, but they /are/ there. I'd say most of the plot lines are going to be converging within the next 5-10 chapters, so everything is there, there is just a few clarifying details which I know are not there.
Author's Response: I want so so so badly to respond to this, but every time I think of something to say, its super spoiler-y and I can't do it. But yeah... horcrux. Definitely not a problem at all...
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was going for! Hahaha! So glad you're enjoying it!
I’m very interested in the horcrux situation. Is Elias still a horcrux? He felt and saw the meeting but Voldemort didn’t seem to know or feel Harry. Thank you so much Author's Response: Block text incoming! This is gonna go a bit into the lore that I've kinda created for this story as well as canon, so hold onto something. In the books, Voldemort doesn't really begin explore the connection to Harry until 5th year, so after the 3rd task and his resurrection. It really isn't until after the incident with Mr. Weasley being attacked that he seems to be exploiting this. In my mind, this means he wasn't 100% sure what he was seeing was actually through Harry's eyes. He knew Nagini was a Horcrux, but wasn't sure or didn't know Harry was one. Connection: yes; Horcrux: no. It wasn't until after Harry got Dumbledore to respond quickly enough to Mr. Weasley's attack that he realized how exploitable this connection was if he sent enough truthful information through it. In this story, he's still at the point where he could feel the connection and know it's there. However, Elias has been on an absolute metric ton of potions which change the way his nervous system works and on one particular potion (Fulgur) which is helping to modulate his core's strength and innate healing powers. Essentially, the Fulgur is providing his core with a bit of extra power to try and heal ... everything. There is a bit of a side-effect to the Fulgur which is actually hidden in the origin of the potion's name (which is a bit of a spoiler but will be cleared up somewhat in ... four chapters from this one) which is essentially providing a bit of shielding from the horcrux's effects. The additional power provided by the Fulgur is also allowing his magic to try and heal the lesion caused by the horcrux, essentially making the connection invisible to Voldemort. When he missed a dose, the extra shielding disappeared and the bit of healing done by his innate magic was halted, thus opening the connection back up slightly. He was still subtherapeutic in his Fulgur titer after the night dose which was why the connection remained open for as long as it did, however because the dose he had received put him closer to the therapeutic threshold of the potion, the connection didn't go both ways.
Its your fault for being such a fantastic author and having a story that just leaves us on the edge of our seats. Now I know why didn't comment on last reviews - I was too close. LOL Hope you had a fantastic birthday. Author's Response: Lol, don't worry. I don't mind everyone being a bit greedy. I will say, I have some long chapters coming up. And we're moving into the part of the story arch I've lovingly labeled as "pure chaos," so you have that to look forward to. I hadn't responded to the last reviews because I was celebrating my birthday and didn't feel like it. But yeah, so close. I love it when the reviewers start picking up on my hints. I'm kinda sad that no one has picked up on one of the most glaring plot points though. Or at least I think it's glaring. At this point, all of the clues to figuring it out are there, but I'm not gonna say anything more than that. That's gonna be my little mystery. ;)
Author's Response: I know... I'm so mean to him! Thanks for the birthday wishes! Glad you enjoyed the chapters!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!!!
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