| Title: Chapter 31
| 09 Jun 2021 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh it's definitely gotta be the fulgurs. I mean it affects Elias' magic right that's why it's so dangerous; so its gotta be poisoning the horcrux too, making it too weak to keep a line open for Voldie to manipulate. So when he missed a dose and it left his system he was vulnerable to the connections and the crucio he put on severus hit harry too I guess.... if Dumbledore had just told severus about the horcrux by now, or the full prophecy even, severus would be in a much better position to keep Elias safe from both sides. As it is, I have a bad feeling snape is about go have to choose. and soon. I mean he cant keep risking his life to lie to Voldie after he just killed nott (with snapes own spell even!), and he cant go all in for Dumbledore cause Dumbledore would still use Elias for his chess game and he wouldn't give half a crap if both snape and Elias die in the doing (he'd probably prefer that avtually). I thought maybe the headache in last chapter had another motive than just the weather changing but then this is Elias and everything's going to be new, in a way, y'know. You cant just expect there to ever really be a "routine" considering he could spasm and stop breathing one second or have a seizure the next. I know I said it once but again, happy birthday to you! And thank you for these awesome chapters
Author's Response: Damn, you are right on the money! Glad you enjoyed it and are picking up on most of what I'm putting down! Glad you're enjoying it!
| Title: Chapter 30
| 09 Jun 2021 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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My God it's a magical Google translate 🤣😂 poor elias. Did it seem like snape was inferring he could actually read/understand Russian? When he said "I would know" I mean.... anyway, I'll keep this one short since you've graced us with another at the same time! 😁 but happy happy happy birthday!
Excellent and unique story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Poor Harry :(
Author's Response: I know... poor Harry... Hope something bad doesn't happen to him...........
| Title: Chapter 29
| 05 Jun 2021 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I suppose, given Harry’s reckless behaviour in the past, there was bound to be a transgression along the line. I do like Draco and Harry together I think they are good for each other.
Severus says that Dumbledore does not know the whole prophecy. Is this Severus’s assumption or is this part of your story?
Thank you for a great chapter and story.
Author's Response: My apologies for the confusion on this one. I missed that little bit when I was going through and making sure things made sense. Voldie doesn't know the entire prophecy, Dumbledore does.
| Title: Chapter 29
| 03 Jun 2021 11:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Couldn't believe it when snape took 75 whole points but then I thought about it and yep dad!snape would definitely do that for endangering his son. Poor draco, just wanted to give Elias a little bit of fun and now he's lost his broom, has detention, and has cost slytherin more points than they've ever lost from snape. Hopefully slytherin isn't too angry with draco or Elias about it. They'll just have to kick butt in the next quidditch matches is all. Surprised severus didnt quarantine Elias to their quarters lol, I was exp rid acting him to go nuclear like nope from now on you can have meals, tutoring and everything else in our quarters period. Glad he didnt of course. It's interesting to see, it's just hitting harry that "phuck, this is real. This is my life now. And screw the BWL lock. This one isn't going to be fixed by a night in the medical ward and some skelegrow or a Phoenix tear..." I think it's really important that he has this time to come to that realization though. I mean, he's been living like one day he wont need to be Elias again I think but the reality is he will never be Harry Potter again
Author's Response: I'm really glad someone is sitting here analyzing these chapters like this.... It makes me really really excited for posting the next few chapters because I often wonder if people are catching some of the clues I've been putting in about how things are going to go down in the rest of the story.
Thank you, thank you ;)
Author's Response: *bows* No, thank YOU!
“Yes, Mr. Snape,” Severus said with a malicious grin. “You are grounded. And you will be serving detention with Mr. Malfoy as well.”
Ouch. Why does it sound like Snape wishes he could also still take points from Gryffindor for Elias? LOL
And yay for 2 chapters next week! That's the kind of thank you gift I love from authors.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure he would have removed all of Gryffindor's points if he could have. Glad you're enjoying!!!
| Title: Chapter 28
| 31 May 2021 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I’m afraid I can’t be sympathetic to Dumbledore’s stresses!
Great chapter I was wondering how long it would be before Umbridge started on Remus.
Author's Response: Neither can I, friend! Umbridge will umbridge as expected.
| Title: Chapter 28
| 28 May 2021 1:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Awesome chapter! Really intrigued by this project. Also can't wait to see Dumbledore when Tonks and Shacklebolt take him down -- hope she covered the trail on who ordered the files else it'll lead him straight to them
Author's Response: I'm really excited for you to read the chapter I just finished writing if you like the project! As for Tonks and Shacklebolt, I will give no spoilers.
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