Thanks for the nice chapter. I hope that Dumbledore doesn’t discover Tonks before she is able to bring Harry’s files to light.
Author's Response: I refuse to either confirm nor deny that this will happen. Mostly because I haven't written it yet. :)
It’s ok to have other characters besides Snape. I enjoyed Remus’ point of view. I did wonder how Harry could focus for four hours with his issues. Maybe he’s hyper focused? I enjoyed your chapter.
Author's Response: Middle of the day to early afternoon: decent concentration and ability to focus. Mornings are hard because his potions aren't in his system yet. Late evenings, as the sun goes down, things... change. I haven't really touched on sundowners yet, but there will be a section in a later chapter dedicated to it. And man does sundowners hit hard. If ever there was something to look up, that would be it.
I hate to be greedy, but since this was so short I hope we have another update soon. :D
Author's Response: Not to worry, updates will continue to occur regularly. Next week will be a double header, but that's my present to you all for being awesome!
The very first line made me laugh. “Why is it my Slytherins currently have an obsession with consuming potatoes.” =0) I guess I shouldn’t be surprised that Ron is spilling the beans. You can’t keep secrets from your friends. I’m curious to see how long it takes for the Griffendors to confront Elias. Thanks for the great update.
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| 24 May 2021 8:49 pm
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Just read my review and realised that spell checker bunnies have ruined what I wanted to say! I meant of course Tonks. Thanks again
| Title: Chapter 27
| 24 May 2021 8:46 pm
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Excellent chapter. I’m so glad you have taken the neglect that Dumbledore showed to Harry and had tanks find it. I’ve always really liked her as a character and I dislike Dumbledore for his “greater good” speeches and how he treated a vulnerable child. I have a feeling that the story Severus and Harry concocted is going to be blown open and I dread what will happen to our two, I hope electricity can save the day! Speaking of that I love the potato clock and the slytherins eating them!
Thank you for updating.
This is a fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed Ron applying his head for strategic thinking towards the conundrum of Harry’s disappearance and Elias’s emergence. So exciting that you have the whole plot line for this story planned out. Thanks again for this great chapter.
| Title: Chapter 27
| 23 May 2021 5:13 pm
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I'll admit I'm not sure about where this is going. Ron having his suspicions is maybe fine, and Neville wondering about the options, but Hermione with her self righteousness is pretty much guaranteed she's going to take it to Dumbledore or someone else that means it gets back to Dumbledore anyway. And then Elias and snape are both in a helluva lotta trouble. I gotta admit -- again-- lol that I'm I'm ridiculously impressed with your Tonks. The fact that she recognized the pattern, found Dumbledores trail, and had the brilliance of mind to make copies both of her memory and the documents.... I mean she is truly a work of art in this story. I'm excited to see her role continue and grow even more significant. I swear I'm trying to not go into a long rant like usual lol I just have so many thoughts as I'm reading. Draco convincing everybody to eat potatoes is such a draco thing to do. He doesn't understand but what he does understand he takes and runs with it lol and snape realizing how big Harry's project really is, that's brilliant too! I mean no one has studied this and it's crazy not to cause muggles haven't been hiding in a dark corner somewhere. They've been inventing and creating and destroying and growing as a species while the wizarding world still thinks they're churning butter in the yard. It's like an uprising that's not even am uprising. Just a quiet tide that could easily wash over the whole wizarding world. I mean, one bomb + 1 disgruntled squib or muggleborn who can point out its location, and bye bye Hogwarts .... swear I really tried not to ramble. Feel free to ignore me
Ooh, things are heating up rapidly now! Hermione is still annoying, but at least she's thinking.
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