| Title: Chapter 25
| 14 May 2021 4:52 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Ron's an idiot but if he tells Hermione's what harry was saying before they flooded in, I'm sure she'll figure it out.... or maybe not. She's always been pushy and a bit too self important-- it's like she thinks whatever her thoughts are are the most important thoughts on the subject regardless the subject matter. Like when she criticizes harry or automatically assumes stupid stuff and harry and Ron go with it cause everybody expects her to be the only smart one in the trio. Anyway, it was a great chapter. I'm glad mcgonagall stood up for Elias but I certainly see the griffyndors getting worse before they get better. I mean they turned on harry for the whole year second year when they thought he was slytherin their until he saved Ginny at the end. I know he wanted to befriend people of different houses, but I hope snape can see that it's not going to be a good idea until his memory lapses are a bit better under control. As it is, he could be sitting with the puffs and ststt crying about Cedric and give the whole game away. Did I mention awesome chapter? I got a new phone and literally the first thing I'm doing is setting up my chrome browser so I can read your new update a86;
Author's Response: Heh! Glad you enjoyed it! More is up as we speak!
I absolutely love this story! So unique!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! There's plenty more to come!
| Title: Chapter 24
| 08 May 2021 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear, Colin is certainly stoking the fires for Elias. I loved the discussion between Remus and Elias I think you are raising many issues that are very interesting. I liked how you showed the vulnerable side of Slytherin house and how they welcomed Elias. It would be lovely to have some more Elias/ Severus interaction but I know you have so many strands of this story to keep going.
Thank you an excellent chapter
I love reading this story. I like how we are now going to see the perspectives of the Slytherins.
Colin is going to stir up so much trouble. Poor Harry.
Thank you for the updates.
Another excellent chapter. Nott’s story was a surprise and added to your story. Is he going to be upset or suspicious about Harry’s survival? With a sibling who died while Harry survived, he could be interested in why.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't want to give anything away, but Nott is going to have a rough time... :/
I really love this story. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I really love this story. Very well written.
I really love this story. Very well written.
I really love this story. Very well written.
| Title: Chapter 24
| 06 May 2021 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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The boy who might be harry's biggest fan turns out to possibly be elias biggest threat. That photo could sneak a thousand words (I can't remember if elias still had the scar but even without it, doesn't he still look like lily a bit) or even it'll just be the prophet taking the pic and running with it trying to see who knows anything about elias. Poor kid can't catch a break. Though it may be wishful thinking, I kinda maybe got the feeling that the kids weren't die hard death eater wanna bes. Interesting that you had another character who had harry's disease. The disease is the one thing that's 100% infallible even, no one can check his medical stuff and say he doesn't have it. So theo knowing a bit about it makes it more credible (at least in my mind ... Y'know how somebody has something and you've never heard of it so you're like is that even a real thing) so anyway, awesome work on this chapter!
Author's Response: Potential biggest threat! There are so many different ways that this could fail apart and... I'm super excited to post the next chapter, but I don't wanna give spoilers and I need to finish another few before I post that one so I have a bit of a bigger backlog of chapters to pull from... I like studying strange or obscure diseases, it interests me greatly and really helps with my IRL job. There has been a lot of times where I learn about a new disease only for it to come up either in conversation or as an actual diagnosis at work. Very rarely do these things exist on their own, and in a insular community like the wizarding world (which has just gotten out of a major conflict within these children's life spans) I'm very certain someone somewhere would have been exposed to the same diagnosis or at least a similar one.
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