| Title: Chapter 19
| 06 Apr 2021 8:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, a lovely chapter with Severus and Remus having a civilised conversation. You portray the problems that Elias has in coping with the world so sensitively and well thank you.
Have I mentioned lately how much I love your Remus? That first paragraph about being stood up for job interviews was so perfect! I'm also really enjoying how you write Elias' struggles. And, of course, his making the wizards see sense about muggle studies was brilliantly done!
I guess Dumbledore's face and Remus's face when he finds out Elias is Harry.
| Title: Chapter 18
| 27 Mar 2021 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, I love this story! Elias is a charming mixture of Harry and himself, he is still so unsure of himself and his position that it makes your heart break
I guess Dumbledore's face and Remus's face when he finds out Elias is Harry.
| Title: Chapter 17
| 23 Mar 2021 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved how Elias confused Dumbledore, quite right to horrible man not looking after Harry. Thank you so much a wonderful story.
I am really enjoying this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing it with us. =0)
I loved Elias messing with Dumbledore and freaking Snape out in the process :). That was awesome. And I'm so excited to see how it goes with Remus! I liked how you wrote him; his thoughts about moving and jobs were so on-point, and his and Snape's mixed feedings about working together promise lots of interesting interactions.
| Title: Chapter 16
| 11 Mar 2021 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry he is so confused. I love that Draco is feeling protective of Elias, I hope it continues. Thank you for a wonderful story
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