Poor Harry/Elias. He's really having a rough time. At least Snape got a clue of what else is going on with him. Draco is being very sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 05 Mar 2021 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love this story so much. Severus is doing such a wonderful job battling for Elias, Shannon is a great character, I hope she makes it back into the story again
Oh no, I understood quite well Voldie is making things worse! That's why I said that any progress in healing him gets reversed by that connection. Poor Harry. I do understand about doling out the chapters, but how else will you know we like it a lot if we don't whine a little?
Author's Response: My apologies, I misread your original comment! I figure I cannot make everyone happy, so I shoot for continuity. This story is going to get rather complicated quite soon, so I’m trying to keep things both making sense and moving forward at a reasonable pace.
Wow, that sounds like quite the mess. Wait till she finds out progress is halted and reversed due to a connection to Voldemort! As if he doesn't have enough problems. The only complaint I have is updates are not fast enough. I know, I know, its that pesky LIFE thing you writers have. Its okay, I'll be waiting.
Author's Response: I am afraid you have misunderstood.... Voldie is definitely making things worse. I shall not spoil the things though. I am trying to stay roughly 100 pages ahead of the reader just because there is a lot of continuity issues I am trying to keep in check. I could spam out like 18 or so more chapters right now, but that rather locks me into a position I can’t work around and would cause even longer waits between updates.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 01 Mar 2021 6:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, he seems to have such a rough time and doesn’t even know who he is or who Severus is. Great chapter thank you for updating your excellent story.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 28 Feb 2021 2:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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I'm really enjoying this story, It's so good to see the regular updates!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 21 Feb 2021 3:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lot of hopes in this chapter! Very good chapter, poor Harry, if he remembers his vision he will be torn in wanting to stay hidden but not wanting to cause Severus any more pain. Thank you for your excellent story
| Title: Chapter 12
| 18 Feb 2021 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear there may be trouble here. I’d hoped that Draco would be a friend for Elias. Thank you for all the updates
| Title: Chapter 11
| 18 Feb 2021 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can definitely see why this story is named Electric Avenue, an excellent name! Thank you I’m loving your story
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