Title: Chapter 10
| 18 Feb 2021 8:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very dramatic chapter. I loved the confrontation between the two, Hermione might learn something from that
Title: Chapter 12
| 18 Feb 2021 1:13 pm
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Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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I'm loving it! So different from any other story I've read!
Title: Chapter 12
| 18 Feb 2021 1:13 pm
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Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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I'm loving it! So different from any other story I've read!
Title: Chapter 12
| 18 Feb 2021 1:13 pm
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Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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I'm loving it! So different from any other story I've read!
Careful, Harry! I hope Draco doesn’t get too suspicious. Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 10
| 14 Feb 2021 2:10 pm
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Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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I'm really enjoying reading this story! It's a storyline that I haven't seen before and the writing is really well done. Looking forward to seeing how the interaction with Draconian goes, if him and Hermione make up and what sticky situations seizures may get him into at Hogwarts! Kudos to the Author, stay safe and sending my appreciation from Australia
So delightfully unexpected! I love how Harry’s reaction differs so realistically from canon, based on his circumstances. And whew, he passed his first big test in assuming the identity of Elias!
Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Feb 2021 7:06 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow, that is one very good back up story! It has enough elements of truth to be credible and easy to remember and it will incite sympathy without being too pitiful. It even has Draco’s sympathy. Thank you so much for updating your wonderful story
I was wondering how Severus had planned on explaining Harry - this is all so brilliant, I shouldn't have expected anything less. Elias is such a great name too. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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