Interesting! I also really like how you’ve shown Petunia displaying a measure of affection for Harry in a way that still demeans him and “keeps him in his place”, so to speak, below her own family. It also makes sense that Harry, at such a young age, would identify with what he knows and is valued for at the Dursleys and would want to go back. I also like the sibling addition. Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a kind review! I am so glad you are enjoying this story!
Title: You're Not Leaving
| 29 Jan 2021 5:24 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, you do have a good grasp on how an abused child will react. I think Dumbledore will have something to say to this, I’m looking forward to that confrontation.
Author's Response: He'll be coming into the picture soon enough. Thanks for reading!
Poor Harry. I wonder what Dumbledore's and the rest of the wizarding worlds reactions to all of this will be.
Author's Response: We'll find out! Thanks for reading!
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