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Title: That Time of Month 02 Aug 2022 11:53 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    I was trying to figure out how a six girl year old girl could be having her time of the month for the first part of the chapter XD I’m really enjoying this fic

    Author's Response: Yep, that was the joke. LOL, thanks for reading and reviewing! Much appreciated.
Title: That Time of Month 21 Feb 2022 9:13 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Dahlia doesn’t seem like a great mother. I’m glad that Iris has Severus.
Title: That Time of Month 27 Aug 2021 1:29 am
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, darn; I really hoped we'd get to the trial before where you stopped!

    Gosh, what a messed-up situation Sev has! It's so close to how rl is sometimes it's scary.

    Sev *was* negligent, taking the word of a notoriously barmy and manipulative old goat buggerer about his child! Ain't *no way* I'm letting the bitch who *hated* MY and *her own sister's* guts and tormented throughout our childhoods take custody of MY son!

    Sev must have been really screwed up! But then, when things began to settle down to not even think about going to visit?!

    I have my own horror story about when my ex (of over 5 years at the time) husband *stole* my 6-year-old son and used the corruption --that's rampant in case you weren't aware; it makes the MoM look tame!-- in the local TN court system and family connections to make it legal! That's why I can sit here and want to warn Sev *not* to count his chickens!

    In 2000, I naively thought we had a pretty good Family Court System that worked by Rules of Evidence and was supposed to work for the "good of the child". I was wrong.

    Anyhoo, I'm invested in this story and am really eager to see what your solutions to some of the 'snarls' existing in Sev's life and what can be done to help Harry recover.

    Thank you for a real nail-biter!
    See you soon!
    Btw, I left you a message over on AO3 about the problems going on here on P&S and I really hope you can make it so I can get alerts on this story!
    Tks!
    MelJ

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It is greatly appreciated. I wrote this story with a lot of truth scenarios behind it, and we will get to the trial very soon! And it's going to be a show. Thanks again.
Title: That Time of Month 15 Aug 2021 10:48 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter, Dahlia is definitely a part-time mother, I thought Severus was going to freak at the ear piercing, I would have done if my daughter had it doe at that age!
    Please enlighten me on what a “hand out” get together is I’ve never heard of one.
    I assumed Sirius was in Azkaban, having him in the story should make it interesting. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: I believe that hand out is a typo. I will have to fix it to hang out. Thanks for the catch. And thanks for reading! It is greatly appreciated.
Title: That Time of Month 14 Aug 2021 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Have to admit p&s is so weird with updates so I didn't even realize you'd added a new chapter until I just scrolled through as a figured nothing in this chapter seemed familiar

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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