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Title: The Trial Part 1 29 Dec 2021 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear it looked so certain but nowPetunia may wriggle out of it. Thank you an excellent chapter.

    Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you for reading and reviewing! It is greatly appreciated.
Title: The Trial Part 1 28 Dec 2021 11:26 pm
Reviewer: minshark (Signed) [Report This]
    Was ecstatic to see the update! The image of Severus with his head in his hands coupled with Harry's heartbreaking last line made this a very memorable chapter and makes me super excited to see how the long-awaited trial plays out. I also just love reading all your Sev&Harry moments. Thanks for writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It is greatly appreciated. Poor Harry and Severus are having a rough time and it's not over yet. Thanks again!
Title: How Rainbows are Made 26 Sep 2021 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter thank you. I love to see Severus interacting with both of the children.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Title: How Rainbows are Made 25 Sep 2021 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. What a melancholy ending to Severus’s story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Title: That Time of Month 27 Aug 2021 1:29 am
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, darn; I really hoped we'd get to the trial before where you stopped!

    Gosh, what a messed-up situation Sev has! It's so close to how rl is sometimes it's scary.

    Sev *was* negligent, taking the word of a notoriously barmy and manipulative old goat buggerer about his child! Ain't *no way* I'm letting the bitch who *hated* MY and *her own sister's* guts and tormented throughout our childhoods take custody of MY son!

    Sev must have been really screwed up! But then, when things began to settle down to not even think about going to visit?!

    I have my own horror story about when my ex (of over 5 years at the time) husband *stole* my 6-year-old son and used the corruption --that's rampant in case you weren't aware; it makes the MoM look tame!-- in the local TN court system and family connections to make it legal! That's why I can sit here and want to warn Sev *not* to count his chickens!

    In 2000, I naively thought we had a pretty good Family Court System that worked by Rules of Evidence and was supposed to work for the "good of the child". I was wrong.

    Anyhoo, I'm invested in this story and am really eager to see what your solutions to some of the 'snarls' existing in Sev's life and what can be done to help Harry recover.

    Thank you for a real nail-biter!
    See you soon!
    Btw, I left you a message over on AO3 about the problems going on here on P&S and I really hope you can make it so I can get alerts on this story!
    Tks!
    MelJ

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It is greatly appreciated. I wrote this story with a lot of truth scenarios behind it, and we will get to the trial very soon! And it's going to be a show. Thanks again.
Title: That Time of Month 15 Aug 2021 10:48 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter, Dahlia is definitely a part-time mother, I thought Severus was going to freak at the ear piercing, I would have done if my daughter had it doe at that age!
    Please enlighten me on what a “hand out” get together is I’ve never heard of one.
    I assumed Sirius was in Azkaban, having him in the story should make it interesting. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: I believe that hand out is a typo. I will have to fix it to hang out. Thanks for the catch. And thanks for reading! It is greatly appreciated.
Title: That Time of Month 14 Aug 2021 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Have to admit p&s is so weird with updates so I didn't even realize you'd added a new chapter until I just scrolled through as a figured nothing in this chapter seemed familiar

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Title: Practice Trial 20 Jul 2021 7:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it went too well but I’m hoping. Thank you a great chapter

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Title: Practice Trial 18 Jul 2021 3:40 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m not as confident as the lawyer. Harry believes he was treated well so you can’t count on his cross examination. Loved the chapter though.

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Title: Emotional Instability 29 Jun 2021 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I learned at an early age that the best way to shut up a bully is to shut him down. I'll admit, maybe it's not the healthiest expression of anger, but it's a sight better than internalizing it until it eats away at you. On that note, I see why they would go this route. Harry is a pretty abused child, mentally more than anything with the way petunia has his mind all messed up. The worst thing for this Harry would be to start using violence to get all his righteous fury out. Though I think he'll have at least more confrontation with Derrick (in my experience, you shut em down once, but they test you one more time to see if it was a fluke), u do hope he's able to deal with it better then

    Author's Response: It would be pretty bad for Harry to start using violence to solve everything, so better stop it now while he's young, but easier said than done. Thanks for reading!

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