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Title: A Real Orphan 28 Jan 2021 10:52 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Snape confronts the Dursleys for what they did to Harry and Dumbledore for putting him there.
Title: A Real Orphan 28 Jan 2021 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter
Title: A Real Orphan 28 Jan 2021 8:10 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this holy shit i can’t wait for the next update. Do you post on any other sites? It’s so hard to read on this one tbh

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don't post on other sites right now. What's making it difficult for you to read on P and S?  Maybe I can help.
Title: A Real Orphan 28 Jan 2021 4:47 am
Reviewer: MissKM (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a neat story so far! I know you have a lot of stories you're working on, but I hope this gets an update soon!
Title: A Real Orphan 27 Jan 2021 5:53 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this. I don’t understand why the orphanage worker didn’t take note of Harry’s repeated injuries. Isn’t that part of her job?
Title: A Real Orphan 26 Jan 2021 3:08 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Amazing chapter! I absolutely love it! Harry got adopted by Snape! Not Harry Weasley, Harry Potter. Yay! That's one way to get around Dumbledore. Ha!

    Although, I'd like to think that Dumbledore would care that Harry was being treated so badly. Would he of demanded Harry go back regardless? With some added threats or talking to the Dursleys? But now Snape has the upper hand. Harry isn't going anywhere, I hope.

    Fantastic story and chapter. I loved Peter and his helpfulness. I almost wanted him to be adopted alongside Harry to Snape. Wouldn't that be something?

    I'm so glad that Harry is now permanently somewhere safe. I worry about what the Dursley's reaction is going to be though, and Dumbledore.

    I love that Harry gets to see the bay and the view from his new bedroom windows. Will he be able to get his old stuff back? At least Hedwig is safe.

    I've really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it!
Title: A Real Orphan 25 Jan 2021 5:10 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how all your stories are different from each other, yet so good. This was a compelling read. Can’t wait for more!
Title: A Real Orphan 25 Jan 2021 5:15 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't have enough to say tonight to review all 3 chapters, so chapters 1 and 3 will have to suffice, yeah?

    It's a tribute to your writing when I say that this story has me anxious. Like, the whole vibe is dark and depressing in a way that's different from most abuse stories. Maybe Harry's struggle is so detailed that you get pulled in to the story and feel what he's feeling.

    You've always been my favorite author - I'll have you know. Just the other day I found another story/author that I loved, and I thought "Man, she's almost as good as JAWorley!"

    I kind of judge the stories I read based on how good they are compared to yours, which may sound strange - and I don't know why I'm saying it, but I felt the need to let you know that's how much I truly adore you and your writing.

    Anyways, to the story again.
    I want SO BAD for Harry to be ok in this story. I want him to eventually (maybe? one day??) warm up to Severus a little, or at least realize that he's there to help him and not hurt him.

    I also really hope Severus doesn't drive him away. He did well to adopt him, and that's a good way to keep Dumbledore off their back a little, for a bit anyways - but I'm still afraid the Headmaster will muck things up.

    Anyways, I've rambled enough. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

    Author's Response: I love hearing things like this.  Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know :)  I've been working on this story for a couple years and waiting til I could get some of my unfinished posted ones completed before I posted it.  Does the other author you mentioned write HP?  If so who is it so I can check out their work :p  I love reading awesome HP fan fic and am always open to suggestions.

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