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Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much a very interesting chapter, Harry has such a low self esteem
Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 7:05 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic, amazing chapter. This has quickly become my favorite story.

    Wow, I did not expect Dudley to be beaten up, and Harry to run to his rescue. What a clever trap! Of course Harry fell for it.

    I enjoyed Kirk's identity being hidden because of his new look at first, and I love that we find out that he will be going to military school. Ha! Justice.

    I hope that Snape will help Harry learn how to stand up for himself.

    I really LOVED how Snape went to the manager and got Harry's back pay. Wooooo! I love how the manager called Snape Harry's dad, and when the police officer came to break up the fight Snape called Harry his son.

    Snape clearly knows his role, but Harry is still not sure.

    And now the Dursleys know where Harry live. Will they mess with him? Will Dudley want to thank Harry, and maybe be friends now that they live apart?

    I love, love, loved how Snape made Harry put 12 snack things in the cart when they went food shopping. Harry is underweight, and I bet that this is part of Snape's plan to get him to a healthy weight.

    I'm surprised that Snape is allowing Harry to eat in his room, but I love how Snape said that if he finds ants that that will change. So normal and domestic! I love it!

    Fantastic writing, and I am really loving this story. Your Snape and Harry are fantastically in character and I love hearing both of their thoughts and dialogue.

    Well done, and thank you for writing, sharing, and updating!
Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry, you prat! Stop being so stubborn!!

    He makes me want to pull my hair out, though I know he's so used to being mistreated that any kindness coming his way will seem false but still - I want to smuck him on the forehead and tell him to open his eyes.

    I sincerely hope Severus will keep his patience long enough for Harry to come around and realize that this arrangement is for good - and he's safe.

    .... It is for good isn't it?
    Anyways, yet another wonderful chapter!
Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 9:37 am
Reviewer: Lady Connor (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter. Can't wait to read more
Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 6:18 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    This has got to be so frustrating for Snape. He wants to help but Harry won’t open up. An excellent chapter
Title: Neighbor Next Door 29 Jan 2021 2:24 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the matter-of-fact way that Severus is taking care of Harry.

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