Harry sure has a thing for Danger Alley.
I loved how when Snape was making potions Harry was like, "That's not lunch, is it?" I bet potions don't smell or taste like a good lunch.
The part about Harry being on the Weasley's clock was cool. I wonder if he showed up on the clock when he said his name was Harry Weasley. Funny how the Weasleys kept checking the front door when it said Harry was "home."
I really like your characterization of Arthur in this. I like that he supports the adoption and that the Weasleys know everything and really want what is best for Harry.
I really like how Mrs. Weasley said they don't do secrets in this house.
Funny how Harry doesn't believe the adoption is real. He will find out eventually I guess.
I'm loving this chapter and story. Thanks for writing and posting!
This was a very interesting concept! I'm happy that Arthur commended Snape for taking Harry in instead of fighting him. It feels much more in character than what I usually see. I'll be looking forward to the continuation!
Harry will be shocked when he realized Severus told him the truth.
Really enjoying this story! I like the characterization of Snape, and the dilemma of the Dursleys living next door. I’m looking forward to seeing how Harry comes to understand that the adoption is real. Thanks so much for these great chapters!
| Title: Family Matters
| 29 Jan 2021 11:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love it when Harry is in the middle of a chaotic Weasley day! Thank you, I hope he starts to trust Severus a little more before the end of the summer. Thank you for your amazing story
Have enjoyed this story and was so pleased to see such a frequent update in my inbox.
Every chapter get me attached to this story. Thank you for writing it and updating
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