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Title: Reality Disguised 27 Jul 2021 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a strange and interesting set up. A Harry who won’t defend himself going into a fifth year with umbridge And that short exchange with Draco was intriguing.
Title: Reality Disguised 06 Feb 2021 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Tsumary (Signed) [Report This]
    Perhaps it's strange to start a review with a praise to another story but it needs to be done. Almost two years ago a read a story named "Love Thy Neighbour" by Alexannah. Well, actually I read it in translation to my native language and was delighted by it. But some time later when all the stories were read I find myself longing for more and hence had to turn to the English fandom.

    Yours story was the first one to catch my eye. If a remember right it must have been the "Camp". With that started my fascination with your works. They are mature, well-planed, and captivating. And even more, they are heartbreaking to a degree you really feel pain in your chest.

    And then I found another story written in responce to the challange "Neighbors" and was thrilled. But when I realized that the author was you it was as if Christmas came again.

    Back to the chapter, I really like the idea of supportive Gryffindors, because the last thing Harry needs now it's their distrustful attitude; and the idea of decrease in Slytherins' arrogance. They must be terrified with the prospect of inevitable servitude to Voldemort. I have no doubt that Umbridge will get hers if (well, when) she dares to harm Harry and Severus knows about it. The question is will Harry feel confident enough to tell him himself, will his friends do it, or will Severus find out himself?

    I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Awe, I love hearing that people like my work, and it's also helpful to hear what people like and don't like about it because that's how we grow as writers.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Reality Disguised 05 Feb 2021 7:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Umbridge is scary. I know she wants to hurt Harry. I really like how Harry is being a model student, not making trouble or asking for attention. The summer helped him out there at least.

    She really makes me nervous though. I really hope that Harry will be able to avoid detention with her. I also hope that she gets a bad end. It seems like that is coming to her.

    Poor Harry being shoved around and injured by the other students though. Snape should put a stop to it.

    I really like that Seamus at least is better in this version.

    I never understood why the students didn't claim that they needed to do practical spells for their exams. They are on the tests... Umbridge should be forced to let them practice defense at least since it should be on the tests for their OWLS and NEWTS. I bet you can't get into the Auror department without good practical defense skills.

    I really like how Ron has got Harry's back in this version of 5th year.

    I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks so much for the quick updates! They are wonderful!
Title: Reality Disguised 04 Feb 2021 4:00 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying the story. Thank you for sharing. Umbridge makes me crazy. I’m wondering if she put something in his bag. I can’t wait to see what she is up to. I am also excited to find out what Snape is going to say/do when he finds out Harry has been being pushed around. I willalso be interested in finding out what Snape does after Harry has a detention with Professor Umbridge.
Title: Reality Disguised 03 Feb 2021 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Cien (Signed) [Report This]
    This story just gets better and better! Awesome *___*
Title: Reality Disguised 02 Feb 2021 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    It's an interesting twist, having Harry be on the mature end and not give in to her goading. I can't wait to see how this bothers her - I know she's got something in store for Harry, but what?

    Also, it will super interesting to see Severus react to her going after Harry. I can't wait!
Title: Reality Disguised 01 Feb 2021 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Snapehead (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep on writing!
    Umbridge is insufferable as a always
Title: Reality Disguised 01 Feb 2021 8:17 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thank you! I’m curious how Umbridge will handle this less reactionary and more mature Harry. I also look forward to seeing how Severus navigates her being on the warpath towards Harry.
Title: Reality Disguised 01 Feb 2021 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A very different Harry from cannon but I really like this one he is annoying Umbridge by not fighting back.
Title: Reality Disguised 01 Feb 2021 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Handa (Signed) [Report This]
    Really love this story and how you’ve portrayed Harry! Great chapter and can’t wait for more :)

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