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Title: To Me 16 Feb 2021 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Another fabulous chapter. I loved it!

    Oh man, where to start. I really loved how Harry had an opportunity to test Snape's commitment and care for Harry.

    I am so, so glad that Harry was able to speak up and refuse to continue the detention once he realized it was torture and unlikely to be the sort of thing allowed.

    I loved how Harry said he'd tell his Dad! And Umbridge took the bait. Ha! I only wish that Harry would of carried the quill with him as proof, and also so Umbridge couldn't use it on anyone else. Snape was fantastic, quickly lying for Harry and I love that he added Dumbledore in as his backup. With their legilimency Dumbledore could pick up on things from Snape and play along if he was called on.

    I actually would of loved to see that.

    Interesting about the blood quill. Did Harry ever lie after using it in canon?

    Anyway, I'm glad that Snape is on to fixing things, and that he's going to get an unbonding quill to help Harry. Snape could of left it, and preferred Harry to be forced to tell the truth a little more, but I suppose with Snape's legilimency there is no point, he could just read Harry's mind anyway and know if Harry's lying.

    It was really nice that Snape let Harry get his book from the library after hours. I bet Snape secretly likes that Harry is getting good grades, and trying to do better. I think the other teachers, Dumbledore and McGonagall, have also noticed and think it's Snape's influence that is making Harry a better student.

    I wonder if Umbridge will make things difficult for Snape and Harry, if the Minister or the Ministry will publish their relationship or what. I hope not. That would not be good for Snape's other position, and it would also make things more difficult for Harry at school too I bet.

    I'm really glad that Harry was able to produce his patronus and that the memory with Snape was the memory he used. :) Hooray.

    I'm really loving this story. Thank you so much for all the updates!
Title: To Me 14 Feb 2021 9:40 pm
Reviewer: Chartry (Signed) [Report This]
    Dolores, you are the one I love to hate. You evil *****. I wonder if she will call Harry Mr. Snape just to be petty about being corrected.
Title: To Me 13 Feb 2021 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! A wonderful way to circumnavigate Umbridge! Thank you, fifth year should be really interesting
Title: To Me 13 Feb 2021 3:22 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how Severus not only backed Harry up but also risked bringing up Dumbledore. Interesting view of the blood quill.
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 5:59 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! I can't wait to read more!
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 1:10 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter is absolutely fantastic. I’m on my second read through to soak it in. I’m totally hooked on this story.
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 10:44 am
Reviewer: MauoW (Signed) [Report This]
    I love all of your stories, you are an amazing ( and prolific) author, but this one hits me right in the guts. This absolutely amazing, the characterization, the relationships all is done perfectly, thank you so much for sharing this piece of art with us, waiting very eagerly for the next chapter :)

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