Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: To Me 13 Feb 2021 3:22 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how Severus not only backed Harry up but also risked bringing up Dumbledore. Interesting view of the blood quill.
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 5:59 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! I can't wait to read more!
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 1:10 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter is absolutely fantastic. I’m on my second read through to soak it in. I’m totally hooked on this story.
Title: To Me 12 Feb 2021 10:44 am
Reviewer: MauoW (Signed) [Report This]
    I love all of your stories, you are an amazing ( and prolific) author, but this one hits me right in the guts. This absolutely amazing, the characterization, the relationships all is done perfectly, thank you so much for sharing this piece of art with us, waiting very eagerly for the next chapter :)
Title: Points Of Reflection 07 Feb 2021 2:31 pm
Reviewer: talented2 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really impressed by the way you make time flow seamlessly in your stories. You just have to look away for a minute, and ta-da summer holidays have passed. Just like in the real world ;)

    Have I told you that before? I think I might have. Can't hurt to hear it again though, can it?
Title: Points Of Reflection 07 Feb 2021 10:58 am
Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice
Title: Points Of Reflection 06 Feb 2021 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely ending to a sad chapter. Harry has so much guilt inside him. Thank you a wonderful story
Title: Reality Disguised 06 Feb 2021 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Tsumary (Signed) [Report This]
    Perhaps it's strange to start a review with a praise to another story but it needs to be done. Almost two years ago a read a story named "Love Thy Neighbour" by Alexannah. Well, actually I read it in translation to my native language and was delighted by it. But some time later when all the stories were read I find myself longing for more and hence had to turn to the English fandom.

    Yours story was the first one to catch my eye. If a remember right it must have been the "Camp". With that started my fascination with your works. They are mature, well-planed, and captivating. And even more, they are heartbreaking to a degree you really feel pain in your chest.

    And then I found another story written in responce to the challange "Neighbors" and was thrilled. But when I realized that the author was you it was as if Christmas came again.

    Back to the chapter, I really like the idea of supportive Gryffindors, because the last thing Harry needs now it's their distrustful attitude; and the idea of decrease in Slytherins' arrogance. They must be terrified with the prospect of inevitable servitude to Voldemort. I have no doubt that Umbridge will get hers if (well, when) she dares to harm Harry and Severus knows about it. The question is will Harry feel confident enough to tell him himself, will his friends do it, or will Severus find out himself?

    I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Awe, I love hearing that people like my work, and it's also helpful to hear what people like and don't like about it because that's how we grow as writers.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Reality Disguised 05 Feb 2021 7:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Umbridge is scary. I know she wants to hurt Harry. I really like how Harry is being a model student, not making trouble or asking for attention. The summer helped him out there at least.

    She really makes me nervous though. I really hope that Harry will be able to avoid detention with her. I also hope that she gets a bad end. It seems like that is coming to her.

    Poor Harry being shoved around and injured by the other students though. Snape should put a stop to it.

    I really like that Seamus at least is better in this version.

    I never understood why the students didn't claim that they needed to do practical spells for their exams. They are on the tests... Umbridge should be forced to let them practice defense at least since it should be on the tests for their OWLS and NEWTS. I bet you can't get into the Auror department without good practical defense skills.

    I really like how Ron has got Harry's back in this version of 5th year.

    I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks so much for the quick updates! They are wonderful!
Title: Family Matters 05 Feb 2021 7:51 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry sure has a thing for Danger Alley.

    I loved how when Snape was making potions Harry was like, "That's not lunch, is it?" I bet potions don't smell or taste like a good lunch.

    The part about Harry being on the Weasley's clock was cool. I wonder if he showed up on the clock when he said his name was Harry Weasley. Funny how the Weasleys kept checking the front door when it said Harry was "home."

    I really like your characterization of Arthur in this. I like that he supports the adoption and that the Weasleys know everything and really want what is best for Harry.

    I really like how Mrs. Weasley said they don't do secrets in this house.

    Funny how Harry doesn't believe the adoption is real. He will find out eventually I guess.

    I'm loving this chapter and story. Thanks for writing and posting!

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