| Title: Chapter 16
| 10 Jun 2021 9:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, great to see a fight back against Umbridge. Severus is so understanding and committed to helping Harry. A great chapter
I wish I could find the words to express my love for this story. I can't do it. I used to be able to, but I cannot anymore.
I will forever enjoy your version of Snape and the way he is with little Harry (and 15 year old Harry for that matter). I specifically love the finger down the nose to calm down, and the helping him occlude even just a little.
I need there be some sort of amazing justice dealt to Umbi--er..Umbridge, and I know you'll deliver (and I can't wait!)
thank you again for this amazing story.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 31 May 2021 3:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much I love this chapter and the healing Harry found with Severus
looking to see when find the solution to harry's curse!! love team work between remus, sirsus, and severus!
I really enjoyed this chapter too. I’m glad that Snape was able to comfort Harry in the end. Keep up the great storytelling. Can’t wait for the next chapter. :0)
I actually finally created an account here after years of dropping in occasionally.... as a silent lurker... so I could tell you how much I am truly enjoying your story. Such an original take with a lovely writting style and it's so exciting to see it develop!Thank you for posting such a wonderful read! I look forward to your future chapters.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 18 May 2021 8:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter. You portray the evil of Umbridge so well, and the voices and feelings Harry has are so well done.
Poor Harry! I will have to go back and re-read the chapter where Snape talked to the Horcrux. That's the only problem with long stories, I forget important parts - but that just means I get to read it all over again! Love the snuggle at the end - although Severus would probably deny it was one.
Wow! What an amazing chapter! So much is going on. Thank you for the update. =0)
| Title: Chapter 13
| 05 May 2021 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow! Brilliant writing thank you. Umbridge is even more evil than in cannon and you portray her so well. Thank you I can’t wait for the next chapter
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