oh man I love this! I remember seeing the challenge on discord, I'm really glad you did it! I really love how you write little Harry and Severus, it's just so soft and comforting :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 03 May 2021 3:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely story. You really showed Harry’s emotions so well and brought a lump to my throat.
What an absolutely amazing story! I'm so glad I got the chance to read it, and I will definitely be coming back to re-read it quite frequently.
Severus saying how badly he must have been treated to be saddled with 'him' as good luck made me smile a little, too. I'm well versed in self-deprecation.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us
This is an amazing story. I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you for sharing it with us!
I love the premise of the Felix Felicis challenge, and really enjoyed the way your story unfolded!
This was charming and sweet! I enjoyed all of it! The felix felcius made for a wonderful plot device, thank you for sharing!
You definitely have a knack for writing engaging stories. This begs for a sequel but does stand on its own quite well.
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