He made up a good story for being on the spot but he doesn't have clothes or books and certainly the hat can't sort him can it? Not to mention Dumbledore won't know anything about a transfer student. And his time Turner isn't broken right, so if Dumbledore finds out he time traveled, he might just send him back.. Oh I'm bursting with questions now, good work here!
Oh merlin this is going to be sooooo good. I can only imagine the drama going to go down here in the present when snape tells the order about this while harry is in His own drama on the past
| Title: Chapter 3
| 08 Aug 2021 12:34 pm
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I’m so glad Harry has his wand with him, I feared he hadn’t after chapter 2. Thank you for an excellent chapter I love Lily and I’m sure Severus will be a major character
| Title: Chapter 2
| 07 Aug 2021 10:11 pm
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I’m not usually interested in time travel stories but this is a brilliant start and such a good plot, thank you so much.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Aug 2021 9:52 pm
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Very good opening chapter thank you
Compelling start to the story! I’m looking forward to seeing how Harry will navigate himself out of the mess he’s made.
Oh Harry, plans are not your strong suit. Looking forward to more of this.
Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Woah! Fantastic start! Just what was Snape doing there? Did he know Harry was missing? Did he have a tracking device or something?
I love Harry taking the initiative and making a plan all on his own, and doing it. Of course it's going to mess up.
Great start! I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you! We will learn about Snape and why he was there as the story progresses. Poor Harry, his plans never seem to work quite like he anticipates they will....
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