Amazing start to the story! I found myself fully immersed in the world you’ve built. I love the way you’ve developed the relationships between Harry, Holly, and Iris. What an amazingly rich first chapter.
| Title: Up the Garden Path
| 23 Aug 2021 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting first chapter, I can’t wait to read more
I absolutely love this so far. I care for Holly so much, and I can't wait to read about the shenanigans at Hogwarts!
Good luck with the writings!
Nicely done. Curious for more
Nicely done. Curious for more
...and the other shoe drops!!! I love this opening chapter; fully developed, takes its time to set the stage for adventures yet to come; beautifully detailed relationships between Harry & Holly, and Harry and Iris. I can't wait to see where you take this story!
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