| Title: Wood for the Trees
| 11 Feb 2023 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter I loved the different viewpoints. I very rarely agree with Lucius but Severus definitely needs to get his head out of his behind!
You are portraying the hatred Severus has for Harry so well. He is even prepared to upset Holly in order to get even with Harry. I think he needs to see a shrink or two.
Thank you so much for well put together chapter
I’m so glad I found this fic again. I’m loving it.
Despite having this story in my alerts list I somehow only realized this chapter was up today.
Anyway, I love how distinct each character's voice is in your writing. I always struggle with that so reading this is a huge joy.
As for Snape, I'm glad you're taking his relationship with Harry so slowly, so to speak. When people are wrong about something and have drenched themselves in the lie they've made, it takes A LOT to pull them out of it. It's a slow and painful process, and I think you've shown this brilliantly so far!
Thanks for the nice, long update. I liked Lucius speaking his mind to Severus, though I wish he had been more clear about how Severus could move forward productively with Holly. I can imagine Snape’s frustration at all of the deceit from those he’s close to. I truly wish that everyone would come clean about the situation (taking the wards off Holly’s album, telling Snape about Oma, etc.). Hopefully, they will realize soon that being dishonest with Snape is not helping!
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