Fun chapter! Thanks for updating.
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| 16 Mar 2023 12:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Iris (Signed)
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Absolutely love your stories! Can’t wait for more😍
| Title: Busy as a Bee
| 15 Mar 2023 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can see why you named the chapter as you did, very busy indeed. I loved to see Holly and Harry flying, so sweet. I hope Harry can outwit Lucius, I’m amazed he can’t see how his behaviour to the Weasleys is affecting there relation ship. Perhaps he will when he sees Harry tutoring them. I loved seeing Sirius, Andromeda and Narcissa interact together and to hear that once even Bellatrix was friendly. The description that Andromeda gave for the reason for Tonks’ name was hilarious! Dudley being a “Personal Trainer is a wonderful twist and so original.
All in all a brilliant chapter thank you
It's interesting how Malfoy Sr didn't realize why Harry looked disappointed in his response. You'd think that with all his scheming he'd know to use the Weasleys as a way to foster Harry's goodwill. But I suppose that's his ego.
I like how the adults are getting so into exercising. It could lead into some interesting things later on. I'm also glad to see Dudley getting involved and I'm curious if his parents know about it. :)
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