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Reviews For No Bed of Roses
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Wow a very instructive chapter. Harry has shown some of his powers and his protective streak, I think some students will think twice before having a go at Holly again. Severus needs a good shaking, he is still so blind to what is really going on. Thank you a great chapter Author's Response: Severus really does need a wake up call
Oh, nice! I wasn't expecting an update so soon! 😁 LOVED the vindictiveneas shown by Harry. I figured he'd put a sticking charm on Yaxley and was so happy to find out I was right so quickly. I also really liked how Harry stopped as soon as Holly told him to. That shows a lot of restraint. Random thing that I found interesting: It's interesting how both Draco and Snape thought Harry was too close to Ginny and Hermione respectively because he's dating Luna. It makes me wonder if they both are just making that judgement because of their bias against Harry, or if it also shows how they view friendships between men and women. Author's Response: I felt like the duel needed to be shown given how the last chapter ended and as it's one of the shorter chapters I was happy to post it. I was trying to show that as much as everyone knows that Holly listens to Harry above all else, Harry pays Holly in kind. It's not all one sided, hence Lucius's realisation at the end. In regards to Harry/Luna with Ginny & Hermione - it's a combo of what you've said. There's definitely bias and also their mindset Author's Response: I felt like the duel needed to be shown given how the last chapter ended and as it's one of the shorter chapters I was happy to post it. I was trying to show that as much as everyone knows that Holly listens to Harry above all else, Harry pays Holly in kind. It's not all one sided, hence Lucius's realisation at the end. In regards to Harry/Luna with Ginny & Hermione - it's a combo of what you've said. There's definitely bias and also their mindset
Author's Response: Indeed - I want to see someone try again
Author's Response: Severus has a long way to go still - it must be exhausting hating someone this much. I'm glad the duel was well received 😊😁
Author's Response: Thought it was particularly vindictive... |
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