| Title: Muck and Nettles
| 17 Apr 2022 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a lovely long chapter. I love how you are holding the various strands together and gradually bringing them together. I can’t wait for the meeting with Harry but I’m trying to be patient. I veer from being mad at Severus and then feeling sorry for him.
| Title: Lose Your Gourd
| 13 Jan 2022 5:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely long chapter thank you. The web gets more and ,more tangled and Draco and Severus are doing themselves no good at all in Holly’s eyes. Can’t wait to see how they both react to the revelation of Harry and Holly.
Great chapter as usual! I really like seeing the different relationship dynamics at play here. It really makes the changing character p.o.v interesting. Everyone's reaction to an event or person is different but ultimately adds to the story without feeling like a retread of established events.
I'm really looking forward to how this meal with Snape Sr plays out.
I love how you’re showing how Holly and Severus are similar while still making them individuals. Maybe hatred for Tobias is something they can agree on.
Great chapter highlighting the various relationship dynamics at play.
Nicely written interactions between both friends and enemies.
Omg El capítulo ha estado genial, me encanta, de verdad. Sigue pronto, por favor. Estoy deseando que Holly y Harry se reencuentren y quiero ver la reacción de Snape al saber la verdad, también me pregunto cómo será su reacción al saber cómo han tratado a Harry sus tíos durante años y si se sentirá mal por eso. ¿Será capaz de arreglar su relación con su hija?
Another well-paced chapter full of detailed exposition and further character/relationships development (trying not to put spoilers!). But my absolute favorite scene had to be Holly & Draco and their gymnastics & jump rope antics!!! I kept laughing out loud as the action built upon itself, and even the adults got drawn into it! (Definitely not putting spoilers about THAT!!!) AWESOME!!! Can't wait to see what everyone gets up to next! 😂
| Title: Leave the Field Open
| 16 Nov 2021 2:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending! Even in cannon the love the Malloy family have for each other is obvious, but it is portrayed so beautifully in your story, and with such humour.
I love this interaction with the Malfoys and Severus but I must say I’m longing for when Severus sees Holly and Harry together. I think we got a hint of how it will be achieved in this chapter.
| Title: Olive Branch
| 04 Nov 2021 11:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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That last bit sounds rather ominous to me!
Thank you so much for updating your wonderful story. I love Holly so much and can’t wait for Holly and Harry to be reunited.
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