This is beautifully done.
i loved this so much. ron is so sweet and such a good friend
| Title: Noticing
| 22 Aug 2021 1:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story, I loved how Hermione led Ron and helped him. Thank you
Interesting story and you did a great job with the Hermione and Ron interactions.
This story has so many great things in it. Awesome Friend Ron and reasonable Snape being the top of the list. I especially liked the subtle comment about how Snape treats him in public, meaning Mean!Snape is all an act. Loved it!
Stories like this always give me goosebumps, especially at the end.
Ron noticing the signs and seeking help is one of my favorite kinds of stories, especially when he employs others to assist.
I could easily rant for hours on this subject, but instead I'm going to just tell you how much I love the story - and how I appreciate Snape stepping in to do SOMETHING, where no other adult would.
Author's Response: Ahhhh thank you so much!!! I totally feel you, there’s just some stories.. I’m glad that mine did that for you!!
Excellent story!
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
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